Practical Course in Verdurian - Lessons 9 & 10

Neve urek Ninth lesson [To Index]

Kiel colir culanulei? How do you get some cake? Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

Pavel vagre so dom, er lele fsë.

Redh ilun appakne. "Esce dy tu tencele culanulië, grazhenom?"

--Dëkuy, mizhe Pavel.

So redh zet lukne, er ya azhprosne. Rho done culanulei Pavelán.

Akzhanne telnen bomen ke sicha tuyce tuyoshara im foruneon.

--Emai, grazhenom, mizhe Pavel.

--Dobre dën, suléom. Rhedao dy rho shrifcelao nom tuë. Tu tencele chunime?

--Rho tenao chunime, pyeru. Et nomai Pavel Tihonei Karley.

Telne bome primetne Pavelán pav chem, ke surtence behdel pazhei er dhunem ruzhem cardhem, er nom MEDRO ÖRNRICEI TELNE TÄL im orhán.

--Ar, tana, telne Täl-- piro tuë e so surcont, rho e?

--Eshele, ar.

So redh cum soin culanulin onzhanne. --Esce dy mu tencelo culanulië, grazhenomî?

--Tencelao, mizhe telne Täl.

Ab vilkan, so redh prenne culanul er ilet primetne sannon, ke ilet colre.

Pavel ciberdne lelen esli nun eshele bostene.

--Otál tencelao, mizhe.

Ozë zhanne. So redh prenne culanul er ilet done Pavelán. Apros fäsre, misurilece com ailuron.

--Rho cumprenai, mizhe Pavel. Ízhece mizhao , er rho sen done culanulei.

--Tu rho otercele perëce, eshshane, telnem domi? Dëkuy vulmize dy tu ditave inyát cuerei, ac rho colcele primetam lië. Eshshane cuesmai kiel tu otere ci-telnem dom?

Pavel ya crezhne culanul zië; fue lyö pav.

--Tu shris, avo esë e kunnaom, mizhe. So zhenát tan deve kuna er kuna.

The house was enormous. Cool and airy, it sprawled over a hillside overlooking the sea. The furniture, the tapestries, the statues-- all were treasures.

Pavel wandered the house, looking at everything.

A servant approached him. "Would you have some little cakes, sir?"

"Thank you," said Pavel.

The servant bowed, and walked away-- without giving Pavel any cakes.

He came upon an older gentleman, smoking pipeweed on a balcony.

"Hello, sir," said Pavel.

"Good day, young man. I believe I don't know the name. You would have arms?"

"I don't have any arms, I'm afraid. My name is Pavel Tihonei Karley."

The old gentleman offered Pavel a small card, which had a picture of a fish and two red swords, and the name MEDRO ÖRNRICEI TELNE TÄL in gold.

"Yes indeed, Lord Täl-- your father is the marquis, right?"

"He would be that, yes."

The servant with the little cakes came by again. "Would you have some little cakes, sirs?"

"I would," said Lord Täl.

The servant used a pair of tongs to pick up a cake and offer it to the lord, who took it.

Pavel decided to see if he would be lucky this time.

"I would too," he said.

It worked [literally, it came thus]. The servant picked up a cake and gave it to Pavel. He then left, silent as a cat.

"I don't understand," said Pavel. "Before, I said Thank you, and he didn't give me the cake."

"You would not be, perhaps, much acquainted with fine houses? Thank you means that you appreciate the host's kindness, but do not want the offering. Perhaps I will ask how you know this noble house?"

Pavel finished eating his cake-- it was very small.

"You know, my grandfather is a banker," he said. "The family owes us lots of money [literally, money and money]."

Lozhi Words Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

Mörî Culture Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

The Verdurian noble ranks are shoh (duke), surcont (marquis), cont (earl), hipcont (viscount), and beom (baron). The title comes just before the family name; thus Lord Täl's father is Örnric surcont Veshdan: Örnric, the marquis of Veshdan, or just surcont Veshdan.

Often a noble family has more than one title, and bestows the excess on the heir. Lord Täl is not the heir, however, and so he is simply referred to or addressed as (Medro) telne Täl, literally "worthy Täl". Note that the family name differs from the title, as it often does. Only the titleholder (and his or her spouse) can be referred to be the title.

The reading only hints at the complexity of noble manners. For instance, the servant calls the two men grazhenomî, because Pavel is not a noble. If he addressed Lord Täl alone, he would have to say sanno 'lord'.

Fortunately for Pavel, the former custom for a commoner receiving a noble's chunima-- to kiss it-- is no longer observed.

Aluatas Grammar Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

Esce piro lë et ditave? Does your father like me?

You can also insert esce before one item in a sentence, to question it or ask for confirmation:

E esce pazh im foruneon? Is there a fish on the balcony?
E pazh esce im foruneon? Is there a fish on the balcony?

You can also append rho e? to a statement, much as we add "isn't it?", "don't you?", "right?", and so on:

Susluomî zet crezhu ab vilkan, rho e? You eat potatoes with a fork, don't you?

If the sentence is negative, add iy ar? instead.

Hutorom rho elire im rhükán, iy ar? A farmer doesn't live in a castle, does he?

The conditional. The conditional is formed by adding -cel- in between the verb root and the personal endings.

lädcelai	I will go	vulcelu	I will want	voitcelao	I will live
lädcelei	you (s.) will go	vulceleu	you will want	voitceleo	you will live
lädcele	he will go	vulcele	he will want	voitcele	he will live
lädcelam	we will go	vulcelum	we will want	voitcelom	we will live
lädcelo	you (pl.) will go	vulcelo	you will want	voitcelo	you will live
lädcelu	they will go	vulcelü	they will want	voitcelu	they will live

Some roots change when -cel- is added:

• -c + -cel- --> -scel-: rëscele 'he would meet'
• -s + -cel- --> -shel: eshele 'he would be'; fäsheleu 'you would leave'
• -z + -cel- --> -zhel: mizec --> mizhelao 'I would say'; rizhelu 'I would smile'
• -ch + -cel- --> -shcel: veshcele 'he would disgust'; iskrishcelu 'they would exclaim'
• -m + -cel- --> -ncel: et noncelai 'I would name myself'; encelu 'you all would buy'

Esli so malsfaom sfahe, rho ilun cumprencelam.
If the barbarian spoke (literally, speaks), we wouldn't understand him.

Esli tencao sherä, eshelai lerezhe.
If I had had a beer (literally, if I had...), I would have been happy.

Esli maris esë rho esme shön, et kekcelai. Iy ilet.
If my husband isn't (literally, won't be) handsome, I'd kill myself. Or him.

The conditional may be used alone, but we can always assume there is a unexpressed condition, even if it's as vague as "if it were only that way (which it isn't)".

Rho maricelai frälinan Vyatei.
I wouldn't marry a girl from Vyat. (If there was one, if one was offered to me.)

By extension the conditional can be used merely to soften a statement or a request. The aristocrat in the reading uses it this way in almost every sentence-- not a model to follow!

The partitive. Besides its possessive use, the genitive is used to indicate composition: chena pazhei 'a meal of fish', verae vinei 'a glass of wine', tecai orhei 'a dagger of gold'.

An extension of this is the partitive, where the genitive is used where we would use some or any:

Urave, vulu zhöhei. Please, I want some mead.
Colreu milke? Did you get some sausage?
Rho sen primetne vinei! He didn't offer me any wine!

If you eat luomei 'some apple', there is some apple left; if you eat luom 'an apple', you've eaten the whole thing. Similarly, compare vulu zhöhei 'I want some mead' with the barbarian's vulu zhöh 'I want mead' in lesson 2. As the partitive always implies that one doesn't want all that is available, it's a mark of politeness; the barbarian is being rude.

You never use the partitive with explicit indications of quantity, such as determiners (ci-chura 'that pear') or numbers (dhuni koupem 'two fruits').

Preposition + verb. Prepositions are often prefixed to a verb to refine its meaning or indicate a location or direction:

azh away + fäsir leave	-->	azhfäsir go away
azh away + prenan take	-->	azhprenan remove
u near + lädan go	-->	ulädan go alongside, approach
ir above + lelen see	-->	irlelen overlook, oversee
ak against + zhanen come	-->	akzhanen bump against, run into

From its meaning of 'in, into' (imelirec 'indwell'), im- has come to be a general causative: im- plus an adjective A means 'to make A'; with a verb V it means 'to cause to V':

anizhe cool --> imanizhen cool down, make cool
lebe new --> imleben renew, invigorate
dhaye correct --> indhayec correct, make right
bogaty rich --> imbogatir enrich

lelen see --> imlelen publish (make to see)
metan put --> imetan insert

Onteca Exercises Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

If you go to Vyat, bring me some wine. If Susana had known that there are pretty girls in Vyat, she would not have married. I would remove that piece of furniture if I were you. I wouldn't accept an offer from the duke of Pelym.

2. Design yourself a chunima and describe what is on it, in Verdurian.

3. Describe a meal, using any Verdurian terms for food and drink you know. Use the partitive when appropriate.

4. Write a short conversation: Pavel's experiences at the dinner table of the Täl family. Perhaps Pavel tries to chat up a young woman, but the servant keeps interrupting.

5. Pick an earlier reading and narrate it in Lord Täl's voice. Use the conditional freely. Think about what adjectives he would use to describe the characters.

Dece urek Tenth lesson [To Index]

E lenge racont It's a long story Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

Kiam lelne polne uestum, urë, hüne. Fue rozhy, sam dubin, iy eshshane vezhane ti-cogë.

--Zdesy, mizhe. Kio e urë?

So uestu ilun rihne. --Aa, dobre dën, grazhenom. Vulmizao, dobre nochy.

--Ab Enäronán, zevu, rho shris dy ei polne? Ktë e uverë lë?

--E lenge racont...

--Chascurao dy e dobre racont, hüne so cilu. Debutanam. Uverë lë, ktë e?

--Velula. Tu ilat velne kiam fuai im meim.

--Acincao dhayece? Kî mey fue? Rho pluye, er soa zëi e ret azh zdesin!

--Fuai im soan torandan.

--Fue im torandan! Zet lavnei, ashcelao?

--Cha, devru, pro azhprenan soa chümka risdoshei.

--Chümka... atüchy, prokio nun chümsnei com risdoshán?

--Bedorsne er tombru im so risdosh im shualnáen, kiam sicha prosuvnai so sefam.

--So sefam? Er prokio prosuvnei ti-sefam elán nochii? Fuei plene sherëi?

--Devru, grazhenom. Tence so ansel esë.

--Ansel lë?

--Ar, grazhenom. So dher domei vlaii esë ya zet berne.

--Prokena ci-sefo tence so ansel?

--Rho, ízhece. So dher rho tana zet berne, prokena sicha tencao ansel esë, acrho ilet ishshelcao, er so sefo ilet tróune.

So cilu on hüne. So uestu rho chümsne sherëi, ac tana sicha mevne com uestun ke ya tro pitre.

--Rho erh itëshireu nun, mizhe so cilu. Tenceo rhofasil nochim, ac nun len imdhayam fsë. Santélece sen mizeceo ktë e dom lë, er ktën onzhanmam.

--Im Pelymán, mizhe so polne uestu.

--Im Pelymán! Kiel... Kio... Ktë...

--E lenge racont, hüne so uestu.

The policeman walked tiredly down the street. The summer night had been quiet, but had seemed very long. He wanted to do nothing but get into bed and sleep. Paradise, he thought, would be a place where you can always sleep when you want.

When he saw the naked man, then, he sighed. He was crazy, no doubt, or perhaps was was running from some adultery.

"Here now," he said. "What's all this then?"

The man looked at him. "Uh-- good day, officer. I mean, good night."

"By Enäron, man, don't you know you're naked? Where are your clothes?"

"It's a long story...."

"I hope it's a good story," the policeman sighed. "Let's begin. Where's your clothes?"

"They're stolen. Someone took them while I was in the water."

"Did I hear you right? What water was this? It's not raining, and the sea is far from here!"

"I was in the fountain."

"You were in a fountain! Washing yourself, I suppose?"

"Well, I had to, in order to remove the smell of manure."

"The smell of-- now why did you smell like manure, you rascal?"

"I tripped and fell in the manure in a stable, while I was chasing the boy."

"The boy? And why were you chasing some boy in the middle of the night? Were you full of beer?"

"I had to, officer. He had my key."

"Your key?"

"Yes, officer. The door of my uncle's house was locked."

"Because this boy had the key?"

"No, before that. The door wasn't really locked, because I had my key all along, except I lost it, and the boy found it."

The policeman sighed again. The man didn't smell of beer, but he certainly acted like a man who had drunk too much.

"Don't worry yourself any longer," said the policeman. "You've had a difficult night, but we'll put everything right for you now. Just tell me where your house is, and we'll go back there."

"In Pelym," said the naked man.

"In Pelym! How... What... Where..."

"It's a long story," sighed the man.

Lozhi Words Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

Mörî Culture Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

If you're being attacked, a cilu will help you; but if you were attacked several days ago, he won't be very interested. If you want justice or revenge, you would more likely turn to your family, taking a few brothers or uncles to confront the malefactor-- or, more likely, to negotiate with the malefactor's family and work things out.

If a terrestrial could visit Verduria, he would soon appreciate that pollution is not a modern invention. The quantity of risdosh produced in a populous city is enormous. Despite the efforts of the street cleaners (pelecî), you can hardly help fouling your shoes. At least the better neighborhoods of Verduria city have paved streets; smaller towns or bad neighborhoods with unpaved streets are an affliction, dusty in dry weather, and in wet, a mire into which pedestrians sink to their ankles.

Aluatas Grammar Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

	Singular				Plural
nom	-y	nochy	mey	fuáy	-î	nochî	meî	fuáî
acc	-im	nochim	meim	fuáim	-om	nochom	meom	fuáom
gen	-ii	nochii	meii	fuáii	-uë	nochuë	meuë	fuáuë
dat	-ín	nochín	meín	fuaín	-uin	nochuin	meuin	fuáuin

The -y in this declension is really an orthographic variant of -i here, allowing us to keep it apart from feminine -i nouns. Given this, the declension is very much like the nouns in -u-- in fact, the plural forms are identical to those of the -u nouns. The only thing to watch out for is the accent on the singular dative.

Nouns in -ia. Nouns in -ia decline a little differently from other feminine nouns in -a:

	Singular				Plural
nom	-ia	prosia	cogia	Verdúria	-iî	prosiî	cogiî
acc	-iam	prosiam	cogiam	Verdúriam	-em	prosem	cogem
gen	-ë	prosë	cogë	Verdúrë	-ië	prosië	cogië
dat	-ian	prosian	cogian	Verdúrian	-en	prosen	cogen

Unexpected forms are underlined.

• The genitive ones are largely orthographic simplifications: we'd expect s. prosie rather than prosë, pl. prosiië rather than prosië, but we'd pronounce them about the same.
• The final -m in the s. acc. (Ditavai Verdúriam 'I like Verduria') is trickier, though -m for accusative should no longer surprise you.
• The plural accusative and dative simply leave out an expected i.

Masculine nouns in -a. There is just one more declension of nouns in Verdurian-- though since so few words belong to it you could just as easily call them irregularities. They are the masculine nouns in -a; about the only common ones (besides a few proper names) are esta 'summer' and azipa 'fat, grease'. They work like this:

	Singular			Plural
nom	-a	esta	azipa	-ai	estai
acc	-a	esta	azipa	-am	estam
gen	-ei	estei	azipei	-aë	estaë
dat	-an	estan	azipan	-ain	estain

Note that they decline exactly like nouns in -o, but with the o's replaced with e's.

Declension III adjectives: -y. The third of the four adjective declensions can be recognized by the -y ending in the singular nominative, in both genders. It goes like this:

	Singular		Plural
	masc	fem	masc	fem
masc nom.	rozhy	rozhy	rozhî	rozhî
acc	rozhim	rozhya	rozhom	rozhyië
gen	rozhii	rozhye	rozhuë	rozhyem
dat	rozhín	rozhyan	rozhuin	rozhyen

• The masculine forms are all identical to the masculine nouns in -y we learned above.
• The feminine nominative forms (s. and pl.) are simply the same as the masculine forms; while the remaining feminine forms are very much like those of declension I. Compare beluana: the endings are the same, but with a -y- before them.

Negative expressions. Verdurians say rho... nun, literally 'not now', where we would say 'no longer':

Rho ai nun malsfaom. I am no longer a barbarian.

Esli medh esë lädcele Vyatán, rho esmai nun medh esë.
If my son goes to Vyat, he will no longer be my son.

Rho... sul has the idiomatic meaning 'only'. (It's considered a limiting, thus negative element, and as you know negative words require rho in Verdurian.) Note that sul can be moved in front of the element which shows the limitation.

Rho piflao sul. I'm only flirting.
Rho emao sherä sul drukin esë. I buy beer only for my friends.
Sul cira zië rho cumprenne soi lozhi sannei. Only his wife understood the lord's words.

Word formation. Many Verdurian words form part of a family of related words, formed by adding various prefixes or suffixes. Some of the most common of these:

-náe indicates a place:

shual horse + náe --> shualnáe stable
colir receive + náe --> colnáe common room, reception area
shrifta knowledge --> shriftanáe university
nuva bed --> nuvnáe bedroom
kuna money --> kunnáe bank

-om (feminine -oma) names an occupation or other associated person:

hutor farm + om --> hutorom farmer
mal bad + sfahe speaks + om --> malsfaom barbarian
cum with + yon bread + om --> cumyonom companion (person you eat bread with)
belgo war + om --> belgom warrior
kunnáe bank + om --> kunnaom banker

-át is often used to turn adjectives or concrete nouns into abstract nouns:

inye kind + át --> inyát kindness
rozhy crazy + át --> rozhát craziness
hutor farm --> hutorát agriculture
druk friend --> drukát friendship
Eledh an aspect of God --> Eledhát religion of Eledh-worship

on- indicates repetition or return:

on- + zhanen come --> onzhanen return
on- + dan give --> ondan give back
on- + lelen see --> onlelen see again; cf. ad onlelán 'till we see each other again'

Onteca Exercises Urek Lozhi Vuî Mörî Aluatas Onteca

2. Rewrite the exercise in the form of a letter from the man to his friend. Don't forget his encounter with the policeman.

3. Make yourself a table of the declensions of Verdurian noun (there are five masculine declensions and five feminine ones). Don't use the same example words as were used in the Grammar sections of the lessons; choose your own. Find all the patterns you can-- e.g. look at all the genitive singulars; all the accusatives; all the feminine plurals.

4. Look for instances of sicha and ya in the reading. Why was each one chosen?

Congratulations!

There's still more to learn about the language (though, thankfully, you've learned just about all the inflections already). You can look through the reference grammar for more. You can also practice using the document full o' readings.

You should also be ready to write messages in Verdurian on the Virtual Verduria Message Board. For this you might find the secret dictionary of modern and terrestrial vocabulary useful.